I like how you gave a lot of evidence. Also I like how you used evidence from the text. But i think you can use a bit more expression when reading from the text
nice evidence and very clear voice
I liked how you used quotes from the book. I think you should work on strengthening your conclusion
Nice evidence and I Like how you use expresion while your reading the story, But I think try to put more punctuation. Try to rest
You gave a lot of evidence, and that was great! Your voice was clear, but you should try to talk a little bit slower. Still good!
I like how you gave a lot of evidence. Also I like how you used evidence from the text. But i think you can use a bit more expression when reading from the text
ReplyDeletenice evidence and very clear voice
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used quotes from the book. I think you should work on strengthening your conclusion
ReplyDeleteNice evidence and I Like how you use expresion while your reading the story, But I think try to put more punctuation. Try to rest
ReplyDeleteYou gave a lot of evidence, and that was great! Your voice was clear, but you should try to talk a little bit slower. Still good!
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